Coursework feedback

 

Strengths:

  • The DVD sleeve contained all the elements of a cover, I also like the image of the eyes behind the character.
  • The teaser trailer also contains typical conventions of the thriller genre, like blood.

What can I improve?

  • The violent images on the back of the sleeve.
  • The lines on the teaser trailer.
  • The exposure and shaddowing on the RM character poster.
  • The quality of the pictures.
  • The resolution of the images.

How can I improve?

  • I could make the DVD sleeve less violent, i should change the polaroids as they are more 18 rated as they are so explicit.
  • When I take the photos for my coursework next time make sure the lighting is good and the quality/resolution is high.
  • Put either Coming Soon or 31.10.19 on my teaser poster as both are not needed.
  • Change the filters on the posters as it is too dark to see the characters.

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